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Illusion of Perfection by ~Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word




I’m walking between the lines of reality
Contemplating the questions that make me human

Is perfection really unattainable?

Do my loves,
                  My hates?
Make all this a mere illusion?

Does my Barbie doll image appeal to the world’s critical eyes?
Unable to see the torment…
The PERSON boiling beneath

I’m a 20 sided dice, covered with mirrors
Trying to reflect the perfection in your eyes
Not allowing you to become trapped between my walls
Hearing the flawed words resounding in my mind

“I’m NOT a perfect person.
There are many things I wish I didn’t do.
Didn’t say,
          Didn’t feel!”

Yet, Alas.
All you perceive is the Illusion of Perfection
Projected by an Imperfect girl.
©2008-2009 ~Pyrox666xPheebs
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Submitted: January 19, 2008
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This is for :iconsexc-blonde-angel:
She asked me to write a poem about some specific things for her art project.. so here it is :)

All copyright goes to her :

Date: Saturday 19th January 2008
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~AquaBlast:iconAquaBlast: Jan 19, 2008, 8:11:56 AM
awsome!!

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Death isnt something to fear!!!!Altho if u get on my bad side i might be.......

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~Tifeh:iconTifeh: Jan 19, 2008, 8:12:31 AM
I like this one.

The first line is like BAM
and then when you said

I’m a 20 sided dice, covered with mirrors
Trying to reflect the perfection in your eyes

I was like. Oh wowowww. I like this one a lot. [:

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R.I.P. Rose, Jesse, Liam, Mike, Janelle.


This is for you.
~emokidunleashed:iconemokidunleashed: Jan 19, 2008, 9:00:20 AM
AMAZING!!!

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broken cant be fixed unless you are loved.
~sexc-blonde-angel:iconsexc-blonde-angel: Jan 19, 2008, 10:06:38 AM
again, thx soooooo much for this!!!! it was more perfect than I had ever expected to be possible!!!! :hug: thx so much! u r a :star:

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* love lifts us up where we belong*
*Spookychild:iconSpookychild: Jan 19, 2008, 1:16:57 PM
I love this! Wonderful job!

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Listen carefully to first criticisms made of your work. Note just what it is about your work that critics don't like - then cultivate it. That's the only part of your work that's individual and worth keeping. ~Jean Cocteau
~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: Jan 19, 2008, 2:24:04 PM
May I borrow the title?

And might I add, another fine piece of work by you :hug:

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Do you believe that what you see is real...or do you know that reality is but a daily illusion?
~Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Jan 19, 2008, 3:22:47 PM
Course you can darling :)

And thank you sweetie pie :) :hug:

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
~Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Jan 19, 2008, 3:23:17 PM
Thanks darling :D

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
~Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Jan 19, 2008, 3:24:50 PM
No problem my darling angel :D
Anything to help :)

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
~Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Jan 19, 2008, 3:26:39 PM
Thanks darling :) :hug:

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
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